Sunday, September 11, 2011

Editors Flash Fiction ENTRY #15


Speed Doubting

Your name?
Hopeless
Laney
How old are you Laney
Lie…25.
What are you looking for?
The nearest exit.
A man.”
What are you looking for in a man?
An attractive, yummy morsel like yourself.  Who am I kidding? He wont be interested in me. God!  Why did I let her talk me into coming here?  Speed Dating is so dumb.  Stop Laney. You could be letting a good opportunity go here.  Look at him waiting for an answer to his question. Since I havent been on a date in forever... No, just take a deep breath and answer
Switch!
Shit!

2 comments:

Julie Lynn Hayes said...

I like this one best, it really captures the moment and the speaker's thoughts.

Mary Andrews said...

*chuckling* Definitely art imitationg life. =]